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Fixed the sentence fragment created by the above author's conversion of a predicate into a whole sentence. Likewise removed "it is" in order to preserve the pattern all the other definitions follow. -- DGJ - 13 Jan 2003 | Fixed the sentence fragment created by the above author's conversion of a predicate into a whole sentence. Likewise removed "it is" in order to preserve the pattern all the other definitions follow. -- DGJ - 13 Jan 2003 | ||
I find it interesting that of all the IF games created, only two could be found as an example of purple prose. Surely you can do better. [[User:Aurora|Aurora]] 18:28, 7 October 2007 (PDT) | |||
Revision as of 01:28, 8 October 2007
-- How about the word novices instead of newbies? --JdBerry - 10 Sep 2002
-- Done. DGJ - 10 Sep 2002
LeeAnnKorecky - 21 Nov 2002 Added "it is." Deleted a comma. Added a period. Made the last sentence into a sentence.
Fixed the sentence fragment created by the above author's conversion of a predicate into a whole sentence. Likewise removed "it is" in order to preserve the pattern all the other definitions follow. -- DGJ - 13 Jan 2003
I find it interesting that of all the IF games created, only two could be found as an example of purple prose. Surely you can do better. Aurora 18:28, 7 October 2007 (PDT)